Will your design portfolio side look the same with categories or be more like a more photography interior page? What will the pages with thumbnails (or whatever you'll be using) look like?
I do like the clean look overall, and the restraint shown. It feels very "photographer." I know that's what you want to do, so that's good. But I'd worry if you're not working as much on your design presentation, if you want a design job… ya know? Even if it's very focused into stationery or the like, I'd be sure to show you're not just a photographer if you want to do other things.
edits I'd make to your about:
"I'm a senior… WHO will graduate…" (not "that will graduate")
"I am a natural light… " (remove also) (this could also be a new paragraph, perhaps)
End "I enjoy capturing…" at "photography" and separate out the other part.
The last bit reads funny, maybe instead it's something like "I also use my photography in my design work" or something…
Overall it feels perhaps a bit much to read in one big block.
I guess it's "Sarah" then? :-)
ReplyDeleteWill your design portfolio side look the same with categories or be more like a more photography interior page? What will the pages with thumbnails (or whatever you'll be using) look like?
I do like the clean look overall, and the restraint shown. It feels very "photographer." I know that's what you want to do, so that's good. But I'd worry if you're not working as much on your design presentation, if you want a design job… ya know? Even if it's very focused into stationery or the like, I'd be sure to show you're not just a photographer if you want to do other things.
edits I'd make to your about:
"I'm a senior… WHO will graduate…" (not "that will graduate")
"I am a natural light… " (remove also) (this could also be a new paragraph, perhaps)
End "I enjoy capturing…" at "photography" and separate out the other part.
The last bit reads funny, maybe instead it's something like "I also use my photography in my design work" or something…
Overall it feels perhaps a bit much to read in one big block.